Was that a "The statement was poorly worded and easily misunderstandable"-situation or a "Implord is sorta incapable of basic human interaction and misunderstood because of that"-situation. Because the latter keeps happening to me lately and I can't keep them apart.
Yeah, I'm not an articulate person, I'll admit.
Another thing I forgot to mention is that Toby reads like a bad ripoff of Jeff the Killer. Mentally ill? Check. Bullied and abused? Check. Loses his mind and kills random people? Double check.
Do you really want to compare yourself to a little psycho who kills people? Do you really want to glamorize that?
Like I said on the main wiki, people glamorize the Columbine shooters all the damn time. It's not unusual for the more disturbed members of society to look up to horrible people.